Wednesday, May 8, 2013

The end of the Circuit



Francisco Jimenez was barley in 1st grade. Francisco was a talented art he liked to draw butterfly’s and birds. Francisco didn’t know English he had a hard time communicating with kids and the teacher. Roberto his older brother knew a little of English. Francisco was interested to learn English. His dad worked hard to have money for his family. Francisco grew up and talked English not a lot but he did talked. Papa was becoming old he barley worked but he didn’t stopped he did everything for his family. Roberto wanted to leave school to help his dad to pay food and other things. Francisco was now interested a lot more in school he studied English a lot. Francisco was glad he had the opportunity to learn English and go to school. In Mexico he didn’t went to school because he had to take care of his younger brother Trampita. Francisco wanted to work with his family. When he was in California he had forgotten about working in the fields. Now he is interest in school sometimes he thinks about working in the fields again. At last Francisco and his family lived happy and glad to live in California and get some money.

 

3 comments:

  1. You don't say he was talented art. You need to say he was a talented artist. You also need to say he was a lot more interested in school.

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  2. It looks like an interesting book. How old is he.

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