Francisco Jimenez was barley in 1st grade. Francisco was a
talented art he liked to draw butterfly’s and birds. Francisco didn’t know
English he had a hard time communicating with kids and the teacher. Roberto his
older brother knew a little of English. Francisco was interested to learn
English. His dad worked hard to have money for his family. Francisco grew up
and talked English not a lot but he did talked. Papa was becoming old he barley
worked but he didn’t stopped he did everything for his family. Roberto wanted
to leave school to help his dad to pay food and other things. Francisco was now
interested a lot more in school he studied English a lot. Francisco was glad he
had the opportunity to learn English and go to school. In Mexico he didn’t went
to school because he had to take care of his younger brother Trampita.
Francisco wanted to work with his family. When he was in California he had
forgotten about working in the fields. Now he is interest in school sometimes
he thinks about working in the fields again. At last Francisco and his family
lived happy and glad to live in California and get some money.
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ReplyDeleteYou don't say he was talented art. You need to say he was a talented artist. You also need to say he was a lot more interested in school.
ReplyDeleteIt looks like an interesting book. How old is he.
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