In my English class we are reading The Circuit. I decided to
write about Francisco Jimenez because he had fought a lot to make a better life
with his family. Francisco is an immigrant kid. Francisco and his family lived
in Guadalajara Mexico, but they wanted to make a better life in California.
Francisco was too young so he didn't know what California was. Roberto his big
brother was very excited to take that long trip his dad was too. When they got
to the border they had to walk a lot until they were far from the border
patrol. When you first get to United States it is hard to get money especially
if you’re an immigrant. Francisco and his family had to work hard to complete
their dream and to have their better life like they wanted.
This post was very good osvaldo no mispelled words but the thing is that you should make your paragraph longer.
ReplyDeleteThis was a really good blog. You should have written longer though. Other than that this book seems really interesting too! Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteI already read that book and it is really cool.
ReplyDeleteThe story is good. The book looks so interesting that it looks great. But add a little more information please.
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